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INclan
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since 1999-07-20
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0 posted 1999-07-20 06:30 PM


A Haiku for "Treasure"

Autumn colors
Shimmering maple reds
A Treasure unspoken


© Copyright 1999 KKunnen - All Rights Reserved
Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
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1 posted 1999-07-21 03:53 PM


THIS IS A VERY SHORT BUT EXPLANITORY PIECE.
WONDERFUL!!


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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe



Princess Lily
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2 posted 1999-07-21 03:54 PM


THIS IS A VERY SHORT BUT EXPLANITORY PIECE.
WONDERFUL!!


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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe



INclan
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3 posted 1999-07-21 06:28 PM


Thank you Princes Lily, I was becoming afraid that all these poets didn't know what a Haiku was.
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4 posted 2000-07-13 11:20 PM


well, INclan,i do know what a haiku is but even if i don't, i believe i will still like this little gem anyway

wow, i believe this is the first free-form haiku i have ever seen at Passions...thanx for introducing me to a whole new world

Tenderheart
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since 2000-03-20
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5 posted 2000-07-23 05:12 PM


INclan....you've become a master at this....it is beautiful.....more, please.

Blush
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Ky
6 posted 2002-10-21 08:53 AM


I just love Autumn and loved this Ku
You captured the moment most splendidly
Blush

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