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Ominous
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0 posted 07-20-99 01:54 PM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Sometimes I get so confused,
and not know what to do.
So many jumbled feelings,
not knowing which is true.

Life can be so unkind,
and so unforgiving.
But the world never stops turning,
and people go on living.

Sometimes you lose the power,
to control your mind.
That's when problems arise,
and the world becomes unkind.

Because your thoughts are confused,
and your heart is torn,
That unavoidable question crosses your mind,
why were you ever born?

Sometimes I get so confused,
and not know what to do.
So many jumbled feelings,
not knowing which is true.

But no matter how bad things get,
or how hard to bear.
There's always someone to listen,
Always someone that cares.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
© Copyright 1999 MysticMyst - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 07-20-99 05:00 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

welcome, very nice piece. we all need to be reminded that we are not alone.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

elvira
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2 posted 07-20-99 07:05 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

the serenity prayer came to mind while i read your lovely poem, do you know it?

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours ...devotion...Master...apart...

DreamEvil
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3 posted 07-23-99 02:03 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I don't know how this one slipped by me. Very good, sorry Ominous.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


Blackdrake
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since 07-23-99
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Depends on the day :)


4 posted 07-23-99 04:20 AM       View Profile for Blackdrake   Email Blackdrake   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blackdrake

HEY SIS THIS IS PRETY COOL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.


HAVE YOU SUBMITED THE BATTLEFEILD YET ?

your bro

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Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light
Ominous
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5 posted 07-25-99 02:01 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Thanx little bro, glad you liked. =)
Crystal
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6 posted 07-25-99 02:06 AM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

This was a good way to put feelings into words. Writing always makes me feel better when I am down. If this was about you, I hope it helped you too. If not it is still a great poem. This is the first one I have read of yours, and now It makes me want to read more.
Ominous
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7 posted 07-26-99 03:57 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Thank you Crystal. I'm glad you enjoyed enough to want to read more. =)
angel girl
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within a whisper...


8 posted 07-26-99 09:06 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

i feel confused much of the time, and i really need someone to turn to. i used to be able to talk to my best friend about everything, but she moved, and we can't always keep in touch.
so here's the question:
is there really someone you can always turn to when things get rough? it doesn't seem that way to me.
angel girl
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within a whisper...


9 posted 07-26-99 09:06 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

i feel confused much of the time, and i really need someone to turn to. i used to be able to talk to my best friend about everything, but she moved, and we can't always keep in touch.
so here's the question:
is there really someone you can always turn to when things get rough? it doesn't seem that way to me.
Ominous
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since 07-04-99
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10 posted 07-26-99 06:13 PM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

angel girl, it may seem that way sometimes, but there's always someone standing in the shadows, that's willing to lend an ear, and a helping hand. The trick is looking. =)
angel girl
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within a whisper...


11 posted 07-27-99 03:55 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

i'll try to remember that and deep looking.
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