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Silver Lining |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
Sometimes I get so confused, and not know what to do. So many jumbled feelings, not knowing which is true. Life can be so unkind, and so unforgiving. But the world never stops turning, and people go on living. Sometimes you lose the power, to control your mind. That's when problems arise, and the world becomes unkind. Because your thoughts are confused, and your heart is torn, That unavoidable question crosses your mind, why were you ever born? Sometimes I get so confused, and not know what to do. So many jumbled feelings, not knowing which is true. But no matter how bad things get, or how hard to bear. There's always someone to listen, Always someone that cares. ------------------ I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
welcome, very nice piece. we all need to be reminded that we are not alone. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
the serenity prayer came to mind while i read your lovely poem, do you know it?  ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours ...devotion...Master...apart... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I don't know how this one slipped by me. Very good, sorry Ominous. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
HEY SIS THIS IS PRETY COOL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. HAVE YOU SUBMITED THE BATTLEFEILD YET ? your bro ------------------ Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
Thanx little bro, glad you liked. =) |
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Crystal Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 62Hazel Park Mi U.S.A. |
This was a good way to put feelings into words. Writing always makes me feel better when I am down. If this was about you, I hope it helped you too. If not it is still a great poem. This is the first one I have read of yours, and now It makes me want to read more. |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
Thank you Crystal. I'm glad you enjoyed enough to want to read more. =) |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
i feel confused much of the time, and i really need someone to turn to. i used to be able to talk to my best friend about everything, but she moved, and we can't always keep in touch. so here's the question: is there really someone you can always turn to when things get rough? it doesn't seem that way to me. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
i feel confused much of the time, and i really need someone to turn to. i used to be able to talk to my best friend about everything, but she moved, and we can't always keep in touch. so here's the question: is there really someone you can always turn to when things get rough? it doesn't seem that way to me. |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
angel girl, it may seem that way sometimes, but there's always someone standing in the shadows, that's willing to lend an ear, and a helping hand. The trick is looking. =) |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
i'll try to remember that and deep looking. |
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