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Aspire
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since 07-20-99
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0 posted 07-20-99 09:52 AM       View Profile for Aspire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aspire

This is just something I have been kicking around in my head and I kind of wondered what anyone else might think of it.

I really some of the stuff I have read on this wonderful site.

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Lost, but not Forgotten

Once there was a time,

When every sight, seen, brought with it a vision of you.
When every sound, heard, was my name spoken on your lips.
When every breath, taken, carried sweet thoughts of you to my heart.
And I, wrongly, though I would never be sad again.

Now there is a time,

When every sight, seen, a vision ugly for your absence.
When every sound, heard, is another man's name on your lips.
When every breath, taken, brings no sweet relief to my torn heart.
And I, wrongly, think I will never be happy again.
© Copyright 1999 Aspire - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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since 07-18-99
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1 posted 07-20-99 10:00 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Welcome, Aspire. I like this one, and the flow is nice. I'll be looking for more from you.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Beautiful...what more can I say!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
elvira
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3 posted 07-20-99 06:26 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

very interesting format...welcome

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours ...devotion...Master...apart...

Ohme
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since 07-17-99
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Texas


4 posted 07-20-99 06:54 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Welcome, Aspire.
I like this very much. I'll be looking for more of your work
 
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