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You Never Said Good-bye To Me

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~one voice~
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0 posted 07-20-99 08:37 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

You never said good-bye to me.
You left without a trace.
I didn't get that last chance
to once more see your face.

You never said good-bye to me.
You left me all alone.
You never left your address,
or means to talk to you by phone.

You never said good-bye to me.
I miss you so much now.
I thought that you loved me,
but I just do not see how.

You never said good-bye to me.
You've hurt me through and through-
Not just because you've left me-
'Cause I can't say good-bye to you.


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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-20-99 08:39 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I like this one, you did well in capturing the emotion of it. I feel the same.

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~one voice~
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2 posted 07-20-99 08:40 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you, Dear Dream! I always appreciate your praise!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Saxoness
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3 posted 07-20-99 09:59 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I like this one, onevoice. It is good.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 07-20-99 10:09 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice sentiment in very good rythym and rhyme. I liked this poem.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
~one voice~
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5 posted 07-20-99 07:21 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you all!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Ohme
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6 posted 07-20-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I see this as a desire to put a tangible sense of finality on the relationship. I like it.
Balladeer
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7 posted 07-20-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This must be a fantasy, one voice. Who could ever say goodbye to you?
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 07-20-99 07:51 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Nothing worse than an open wound. Closure is always needed before one can heal. Nice flow, fine rhyme.
Dragon
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9 posted 07-20-99 08:21 PM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Nicely done! I like it.
~one voice~
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10 posted 07-20-99 08:39 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Unfortunately, Balladeer, this is all too true...my best friend, well, the one I thought was my best friend, moved away and never said good-bye. To all of you, again, thank you.

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

 
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