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~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-07-20 08:37 AM

You never said good-bye to me.
You left without a trace.
I didn't get that last chance
to once more see your face.

You never said good-bye to me.
You left me all alone.
You never left your address,
or means to talk to you by phone.

You never said good-bye to me.
I miss you so much now.
I thought that you loved me,
but I just do not see how.

You never said good-bye to me.
You've hurt me through and through-
Not just because you've left me-
'Cause I can't say good-bye to you.

©~onevoice~

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-20 08:39 AM

I like this one, you did well in capturing the emotion of it. I feel the same.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

2 posted 1999-07-20 08:40 AM

Thank you, Dear Dream! I always appreciate your praise!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

3 posted 1999-07-20 09:59 AM

I like this one, onevoice. It is good.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-07-20 10:09 AM

Nice sentiment in very good rythym and rhyme. I liked this poem.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

5 posted 1999-07-20 07:21 PM

Thank you all!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

6 posted 1999-07-20 07:43 PM

I see this as a desire to put a tangible sense of finality on the relationship. I like it.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 1999-07-20 07:48 PM

This must be a fantasy, one voice. Who could ever say goodbye to you?

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

8 posted 1999-07-20 07:51 PM

Nothing worse than an open wound. Closure is always needed before one can heal. Nice flow, fine rhyme.

Dragon
Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

9 posted 1999-07-20 08:21 PM

Nicely done! I like it.

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

10 posted 1999-07-20 08:39 PM

Unfortunately, Balladeer, this is all too true...my best friend, well, the one I thought was my best friend, moved away and never said good-bye. To all of you, again, thank you.

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

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