How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Angelical Constraint
 1 2 3
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Angelical Constraint

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Mr_Squint
Junior Member
since 06-27-99
Posts 17
Bankstown, New South Wales, Au


0 posted 07-20-99 07:53 AM       View Profile for Mr_Squint   Email Mr_Squint   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mr_Squint's Home Page   View IP for Mr_Squint

No open spaces for me.
No way to even be free.
Why are all the walls are closing in?
It has been approved by someone's evil grin.

Gasp! I need some air.
No this world's not fair.
Can't run, can't hide.
Can't break the rules I must abide.

Closed in, dark and all alone.
I can't even hear a muscial tone.
Where am I now? I am trapped.
Within the walls forever to be wrapped.

Looking for any way out.
Can't even eascape when I shout.
No body to receive my desperate cry,
Or to be a friend and say 'good-bye'.

Of what will happen I am so scared.
No pain of mine can ever be shared.
Cold, grim and totally affraid.
My goals of freedom can never be made.

Hidden away in this box so strong.
I've been kept here for so long.
No wispers do I ever hear.
Just my heartbeat full of fear.

Happiness or sorrow I have not.
A bullet and a gun which I will be shot.
That is all I need to be one.
With the Holy Father and His Son.

With my sorrow I take flight.
But am shot down like a light.
The urge to love is here again.
But no one can I call a friend.

Nothing to do but look around.
Not a single soul to be found.
No matter to me is this.
No one is here that I can miss.

Not a single movement can I make in any way.
Just want to be free and to feel as I may.
So tight is it that I can't even stand.
Or see the stars at night so grand.

The walls have their tight grasp and hold.
I have been here through the years so old.
My emotions have no need to be shy.
No one knows how many times that I cry.

What I am doing here? I have been told,
That I am here until my life is mould.
My questions have made me a maze.
So many that I am thrown into a daze.

Even to breathe is a difficult task,
Like the feeling of a tightening mask.
Can't I be allowed to be free?
And find my family that misses me.

To have back my feeling I would take happily.
Even if it were only momentarily.
Will I be free? Does anybody know
When will my angel eventually show.
© Copyright 1999 Mr_Squint - All Rights Reserved
Delores Hall
Member
since 07-16-99
Posts 358
USA


1 posted 07-20-99 11:39 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Well written and I like the name. This is good. Keep writing.
Mr_Squint
Junior Member
since 06-27-99
Posts 17
Bankstown, New South Wales, Au


2 posted 01-12-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for Mr_Squint   Email Mr_Squint   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mr_Squint's Home Page   View IP for Mr_Squint

I simply love this poem.  How about YOU?
Munda
Member Elite
since 10-08-1999
Posts 3629
The Hague, The Netherlands


3 posted 01-12-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

To be free, to be really me, what miracle that would be ! : ) Emotional poem. I enjoyed  reading it a lot. : )
Mr_Squint will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Angelical Constraint Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors