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Starfish
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0 posted 07-20-99 05:20 AM       View Profile for Starfish   Email Starfish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starfish

a couple laugh,
look inside each other
smile,
blind to
the street,
the traffic,
passing.
© Copyright 1999 Starfish - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-20-99 09:44 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome! This is a good, simple poem. Says a lot in a few words! I look forward to reading more from you.
hoot_owl_rn
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Nice, this one brings a very sweet visual image to my mind when I read it...short, sweet and not a wasted word.

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Starfish
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3 posted 07-20-99 06:57 PM       View Profile for Starfish   Email Starfish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starfish

Thank you Poet devine and hoot_owl_rn for your supportive comments. This poem is a favorite of mine as I like its simplicity, thanks again.
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"look inside each other" is a wonderful choice of words.
Andrew Scott
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Minimalism at it's best is a hard thing to do. Good job! And, welcome into the fold.
 
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