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Unbound (repost, only blank verse I have)

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-20-99 02:55 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Two lone figures stand, embracing, watching the Sea.

The heat of their bodies dispelling the chill.

Between them an eagerness stands, filled with fear.

Turning to him, probing his eyes, she finds love.

Revealed by her own eyes, he sees a yearning.

Together, as one, the decision is made.

As their lips touch, their love springs to it's full bloom.

On a rock, rising above the Sea they lie.

They consummate their love here, for all to see.

The fire met, he lays his head upon her breast.

With his hand upon her silken thighs, she cries.

As tender as a dove, he wipes her tears aside.

In answer to his touch, she faces the Sea.

As one they stand, both feeling their fulfillment.

Two lone figures stand, embracing, watching the Sea.

The night beckons, calling them to it's embrace.

Stepping from the rock, their lips touch, their last kiss.

As they kiss, the Sea takes them in it's embrace.

©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


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Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 07-20-99 02:57 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

As you already know, I really like this. A good open verse. In my humble opinion anyway. Keep up the great work!

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*


~one voice~
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2 posted 07-20-99 03:00 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, I could read this a thousand times over. I wish I could be there.

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

elvira
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3 posted 07-20-99 03:10 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

check your e-mail, luv

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


Dragon
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4 posted 07-20-99 03:36 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Very well written.Time for you to write more!
DreamEvil
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5 posted 07-20-99 05:18 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you, I'm posting this to Critical Analysis, as well.
Starfish
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6 posted 07-20-99 05:40 AM       View Profile for Starfish   Email Starfish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starfish

I dream of beaches and your poem transposed that image of love, into figures; or maybe it is just my over active imagination. Thanks for your insiration.
Lost Dreamer
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7 posted 07-20-99 07:19 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Wow, spell binding, passionate, intense, and most of all beautiful. Thanks for sharing, I am in awe with this one.
Saxoness
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8 posted 07-20-99 09:25 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I really like this one, dreamevil

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot
DreamEvil
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9 posted 07-20-99 09:06 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

THank you.
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