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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-20-99 02:25 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I cruise these streets
In search of fresh meat.
My passions are quite hardcore.
I need their fear
just to feel complete.
Their expressions, I adore.

What will it be now,
rape, murder, mayhem,
all such valid things to do.
I'll watch the light
in their eyes
grow dim.
Don't let me
catch up to you.

I speak
With softly hidden deceit,
so comforting
to your heart.
Don't get me wrong,
I do not mistreat.
It's over before I start.

A predator
is what I am now,
a wolf amongst these sheep.
Before it's time for my final bow,
I have promises to keep.

That delightful scream,
will be my dirge,
a song that's sung, just for me.
Reality and my dreams will merge,
as will
my insanity.

©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©




[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-20-99).]
© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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1 posted 07-20-99 02:33 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

going out for a pack of cigarettes now, hope you don't live in California...thanks for the shivers Dream

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


Alwye
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In the space between moments


2 posted 07-20-99 02:36 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

woah, very dark....and extremely good. I like it!

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*


~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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3 posted 07-20-99 03:05 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

These two are right....this one instills the fear! Quite beautifully written though.

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Dragon
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since 07-14-99
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4 posted 07-20-99 03:33 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Well done my friend....shall I join you!Love it!
DreamEvil
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5 posted 07-20-99 05:14 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Anytime Dragon, anytime.
Saxoness
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6 posted 07-20-99 09:44 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Shivers.........literally. you and dragon are a pair.......now I must watch out for you both!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot
DreamEvil
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7 posted 07-20-99 09:20 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The response has been exactly what I hoped for.
INclan
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since 07-20-99
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8 posted 07-20-99 09:30 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

An interesting presentation......I tend to shoot first and then ask qustions. Are you a poster child for the NRA?
Sundance
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since 07-11-99
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9 posted 07-20-99 09:32 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Nice, I like it. Look forward to more!

DreamEvil
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10 posted 07-21-99 03:31 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you, both of you. There is more in the works.
Gentle Soul
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11 posted 07-26-99 08:39 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

I dont know how I missed this poem when replying.. I like it Dream..

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Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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12 posted 07-26-99 11:59 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

This is scary to think about.I don't think
I'll sleep tonight.
Nicole
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since 06-23-99
Posts 1896
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13 posted 07-29-99 03:24 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I have felt the claws of your predator, there are too many of them out on the street. I'm sending this back to the top...watch your backs everyone! Very well written.
Phantom
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since 08-03-99
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14 posted 08-03-99 05:24 AM       View Profile for Phantom   Email Phantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phantom

The more I read of your writings the more I like.

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Open your heart to the Darkness,set your soul free.
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