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Final Verse

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-20-99 01:56 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Perhaps this is the last verse
I will ever write,
I'm tired of being derided,
called weak and uninspired.
My verse is considered jaded,
boring, and trite.

I think I am right in returning
to the burning pleasures of the Night,
therein lies the delight
that drew me with my yearning.

Hate keeps me alive,
safe and warm,
Within the arms of vengeance
that never relents
or parts
the tapestry of me.

I open my eyes to
what blinded me before,
I found to my sorrow
That all the reasons
That made me flee,
Where there,
staring back at me.


Against this fate
I will not wail and curse,
Just put to paper
this final verse.

©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 07-20-99 01:59 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

o no you dont i drag you by the ear from the depths of hell never ever will dream have a dry inkwell!!!!
elvira
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2 posted 07-20-99 01:59 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

don't you dare stop writing...not because of some self-appointed critic
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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...




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Alwye
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3 posted 07-20-99 02:02 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I once again agree with elvira. You are much to talented to stop...use those words, for you are blessed with the gift.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*


~one voice~
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4 posted 07-20-99 02:51 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! But yeah, you better not stop writing...

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

JP
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5 posted 07-20-99 02:52 AM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

To quit in the face of adversity...... tis the shame of cowards and wannabe's... While I can make no claim to your talent, I can call attention to your potential. Do the world, and yourself a favor and quit the whinning and beging the creating.... add beauty to this world in the form of verse, both dark and lovely.

Either that, or quit, without the sorry swan song.
Dragon
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6 posted 07-20-99 03:29 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

You think so do you? Not a chance my friend...this Dragon's claws will not let you escape.
DreamEvil
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7 posted 07-20-99 03:38 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Sorry to say this, but some seem to have a problem distinguishing between fantasy and reality. Perhaps, they should try expressing themselves, venting to be rid of an unwanted emotion.
Lost Dreamer
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8 posted 07-20-99 07:33 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

You have a wonderful talent with the written word, and the creative ways to use them. Like I said in a previous response I don't really like dark writing, but let me tell you this, you have a way of writing it with the right touch and that is a gift. Please keep your pen filled with ink, and our eyes inspired with your skill.
Saxoness
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9 posted 07-20-99 09:32 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

We all know he cannot stop writing.....for if he is like us..........writing is like breathing, we cannot stop it and expect to live for very long.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot
DreamEvil
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10 posted 07-20-99 09:14 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Exactly right, Saxoness.
Ohme
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11 posted 07-20-99 09:19 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

If he ever stops writing, somebody go check on him. He would have to be sick.

Keep it commin'
DreamEvil
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12 posted 07-21-99 03:26 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Of course, dear Lady.
thursdayschild
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13 posted 12-14-1999 01:26 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

jaded, boring, trite?
Adjectives one could never associate with
your work!  
Great poem.
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