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peanut
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since 1999-07-19
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0 posted 1999-07-19 11:43 PM


daddy will you see me when i am in pain
daddy will you hear me when i cry out your name
daddy will you miss me as much as i miss you
daddy will you comfort me like you used to do

daddy i remember those long months of hell
daddy i remember the hospital so well
daddy i remember the day you left me there
daddy i remember the pain i couldn't bare

daddy i remember all the good times too
daddy i remember the fun i had with you
daddy i remember the happiness we shared
daddy i remember how much you always cared

daddy i need hugs like ones you used to give
daddy i need life, the one we used to live
daddy i need strength, you always were so strong
daddy i need you, i have all along

daddy promise to love me though you're no longer here
daddy promise to guide me though you're no longer near
daddy promise to watch me and keep me safe from harm
daddy promise to welcome me home with open arms

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elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-07-19 11:46 PM


such a touching sentiment

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Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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2 posted 1999-07-19 11:52 PM


mite inspired by pink floyd just curious like it yes
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