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The game of life

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Sundance
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0 posted 07-19-99 09:55 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

Life in such a fragile thing,
don't leave it alone,for it has wings.
Don't ever play with it for fun,
for it will frighten the person.
So let your life go on,
for it will come and go,
so fast you won't even know.
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1 posted 07-20-99 12:50 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

I need some feedback, how is it?
Artur Hawkwing
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A nice statement of life being like a creek, and instead of fighting the flow, row the boat the way you want to go. Perhaps that comes close? But it was good, and bravo.
 
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