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Letter to My Ladies II

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-19-99 09:53 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My old soul is echoed by Moonlight,
The first poet friend I had.
Her beauty tends to come out at night,
For which I am truly glad.

In answer to the darling Sunshine,
Who was eager to reply.
It was not my place to call you mine,
Now that I know you, may I?

Sweet Alwye, try to forgive me please,
I didn't mean to offend.
I enjoy your warmth and how you tease,
Let our friendship never end.

Elvira, you cast a subtle spell,
As a ghostly presence here.
We're cast from the same mold. You can tell,
By the way we carry fear.

The next I meet only in e-mail,
Felecia, my dearest friend.
My dear, I really wish I could tell,
Where this friendship would end.

You know, I had a Red Letter day,
a free spirit I just met.
I'm really glad she's come my way,
I'm sure we'll both benefit.

Though I have intended no deceit,
It seems you might think I did.
This false deception is now complete,
My dalliances were never hid.

©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©




[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-19-99).]
© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 07-19-99 09:58 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

very nice, I like how you paint each "lady" as a unique soul. Well done, for each of us is a wild beauty, as you have let all know.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot
Ohme
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2 posted 07-19-99 10:02 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

He who opens his arms to the world, must expect to have a few ladys in his grasp.

Nevertheless he can not be all Evil. Perhaps that is why he is known as Dream.

Dream on !
~one voice~
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3 posted 07-19-99 10:04 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Very good letter, Dream! I agree with saxoness...I like you gave each oen a personality!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

elvira
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4 posted 07-19-99 11:01 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

DreamEvil, you're quite a charmer

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Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...

Alwye
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5 posted 07-20-99 12:33 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I agree with elvira, you are quite the charmer...and a great poet too. Keep it up, Dream!

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*


DreamEvil
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6 posted 07-20-99 01:29 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I'm glad that I'm appreciated. Thank you.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


Dragon
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7 posted 07-20-99 01:34 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

I wish I had to following you do my friend.I love it!!
DreamEvil
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8 posted 07-20-99 09:19 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Sunshine
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9 posted 07-20-99 09:29 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ah DreamEvil, a spell you weave
and not your practice to deceive
I'll be yours, so it seems
as we visit each other's dreams.

Great expectations! Thanks for including me among your lovelier ladies.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

thursdayschild
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10 posted 07-20-99 06:51 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

How truly touching to see my name here among
your sweet words. Thank you Dear Sir!
DreamEvil
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11 posted 07-20-99 09:29 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Just giving the Ladies their due.
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