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DarkAngel
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 4
brick,NJ, USA

0 posted 1999-07-19 08:52 PM


I turn around, but no one is there.
My friends are gone they went far, far away.
I have no on to talk to.
I am alone once again.
I am made fun of, who said words can't hurt you.
I rather have the pain of 100 stabbing knives, then the pain of 100 stabbing words.
The shadows are falling upon me,
When will the hurting end.

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Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA
1 posted 1999-07-19 09:02 PM


intense! I like it

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Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
2 posted 1999-07-19 09:02 PM


wow. I must hear from you.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Starfish
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 34
New Zealand
3 posted 1999-07-20 06:59 AM


Evocative poem DarkAngel, I like its mood.
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