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I had a feeling

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swan
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Without a sound i knew just what you wanted, and withen myself i knew that it was wrong.
Behind the expression on your face i saw your true feelings, on that hot fourth of July night.
I had a feeling that nothing would ever hurt me more than what you were about to say.I looked at you one last time as you quietly begged me to stay.
I said,"we can't go back again to what we knew before". you said," i had a feeling i was out of luck", and then i closed the door.
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you say so much with so little, a true victory for a poet. Bravo

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wonderful.

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*Krista Knutson*

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Nicely written.
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