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swan
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since 1999-07-19
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california, usa

0 posted 1999-07-19 06:01 PM



Your memory keeps me up, so i can't sleep. Replaying every moment in my mind, wishing i was in your arms for the hundreth time. I've seen you maybe once or twice in the last couple years, but somehow you've managed to give me hope and erase all my fears. I'll never forget what was said and the way that you looked. It only took about five minutes to get me completely hooked. There's a couple things in life that hurt like hell to do: Number one is wonder what the future holds, number two is missing you.

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Saxoness
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1 posted 1999-07-19 08:07 PM


wow...........you are very good, swan, I love the flow of your pieces.....and I can relate to them. Keep it up!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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