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the stars

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Rita
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0 posted 07-19-99 04:30 PM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

The moment that I knew is the moment when I looked onto
one’s eyes and the celestial stars shined out from them
dripping from the moon inside.
It all seemed like a blur except the constellation I saw
inside of his heart.
Everything else surrounded me as just night, Plain and
black, but when he spoke into my heart the stars began to
shine through me.
Light began to fill the darkness that hid me, the darkness the
others left behind.
The was a lift in spirits.
Everything started to form into place as the empty
hollowness inside me was filled.
Every moment spent was another star that shined even
brighter than the brightest.
The person, the one who saw the light in me, he was what
made my night not just a pit of nothing, but like diamonds
scattered around to all fit perfectly into the darkness.
Everything is how it should be now, and the dark clouds can
not cover my night, for in that night is the one, the one that
shimmers.


By Rita Bowles


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Delores Hall
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1 posted 07-19-99 04:56 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

This is a beautiful poem.
Rita
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2 posted 07-19-99 05:57 PM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

thanks!!!
Alwye
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In the space between moments


3 posted 07-30-99 01:38 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

ooh, this is very beautiful!! Such description!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

 
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