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swan
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 58
california, usa

0 posted 1999-07-19 03:49 PM



I was crying but it was dark so i'm sure you didn't notice.How could anything hurt this bad? Where is the boy i fell in love with, who inspired me and gave new meaning to life. And who is this person standing in front of me looking through me like i'm nothing? I remember the time i could feel your heart beating, so strong, and i wanted to die right there in your arms.Where is that boy that i knew so well? Why did you have to change? Why must it always be like this?

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r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
1 posted 1999-07-21 03:03 AM


I've read just about all of your poems,and
they were all great. such emotion. I feel as if I know you.just like I have said to
others.we can use our own personal pain,and
channel it to do some of the greatest works
of all.

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