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Andrew Scott
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You can't go wrong by going right,
But, eventually we all go left.
For two wrongs may not make a right,
But, three rights do head west.

And,

What goes up, must come down.
You have to ask if it's worth the fall.
What goes around, comes around.
So why go in circles at all?

And,

Every time you go out,
You always come in.
For entrances and exits
Share the same spin.

And,

It's the same with
Over and under.
There's always something, (or someone)
That's one and the other.

And,

In the end
You occupy the same space.
The question is,
Is it the same place?
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1 posted 07-19-99 03:03 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

How about "Ramblings of an UP and Down, In and Out, Round and Round, Over and Under, Left and Right Rhymer"?
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What about "Miscellaneous Observations"?
Andrew Scott
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3 posted 07-19-99 04:37 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Balladeer: I could see that.
Sunshine: Ah, but there is a connection to it all.

I was thinking about "Uncertin Endings"
I view the piece as a statement about all the choices we make in life that create unexpected results. And how in the end we all come to the same conclusion (death), but by different means. There's even a question of one's final destination, Heaven of Hell (if you believe in such things), in the last two stanzas. At least that's how my mind was working when I wrote this piece.
elvira
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4 posted 07-19-99 05:34 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

while reading this poem, one thought came to mind, however trite, "that's life"...nice work Andrew

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Andrew Scott
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Thank you Mistress, that one might work. Off course I'll have to seek clearance with Mr. Sinatra's estate.
 
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