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~one voice~
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0 posted 07-19-99 02:10 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

What can I say? I have my doubts.
Which way is it? In or out?
Up or down?
Or all around?
My dear, you need to choose a route
for one cannot be found.

Give me love or leave my side.
Unknowing I cannot abide.
What should I do?
I feel so blue.
Please don't take away my pride,
or let me sit and rue.

I need to know you love me still.
I need to know you love at will.
Might you kiss me?
Might you miss me?
Must you give me such a chill?
Don't leave me...don't leave me.

©~onevoice~



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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
Sundance
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1 posted 07-19-99 02:19 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Very nice! I like it, I've written a poem like that before, but it wasn't nearly as good. My spelling and word vocabulary, are very limited. I look forward to more!!!

~one voice~
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2 posted 07-19-99 02:22 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you Sundance! You should post that poem!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

dimples22
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3 posted 07-19-99 02:46 PM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

I don't know what to say but I like it a lot.
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 07-19-99 03:03 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

The question begs an answer. The narrator starts out strong in their demands, but in the end they are brought to their knees begging. It's unfortunate that all to often we find ourselves in such a position. I hope they answer soon.
~one voice~
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5 posted 07-19-99 04:24 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thanks dimps, and Andrew...just threw this together really...but thanx for your support!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

elvira
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6 posted 07-19-99 05:29 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i loved the line "My dear, you need to choose a route"...very original that

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


~one voice~
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7 posted 07-19-99 10:06 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

And elvira, thank you, as well!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

DreamEvil
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8 posted 07-20-99 06:12 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Never would I leave you, never.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


Princess Lily
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9 posted 07-30-99 12:44 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Lovely-thought i'd bring oldies to the top


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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

Alwye
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In the space between moments


10 posted 07-30-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

And I thank you for bringing this up, Princess Lily! Wonderful, one voice. I really like this one.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

 
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