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Sundance
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since 1999-07-11
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0 posted 1999-07-19 02:10 PM


On Febuary 21,
something made a burst!
Someone who I loved very much,
had something happen, that made a hush!
Over all our school you could only see,
a pool of tears, which I hated it to be.
I never thought it would happen so soon,
it came one day just out of the blue.
Although it never really got through me that day,
I knew for a fact that my teacher,
had died that very day.
It was a shock,I'll have to edmit.
Somehow I think it was meant to be,
so she could watch over me!
To see how I'm doing in school anyway,
but to this very day,I really can't say,
how much my teacher helped me to see,
I really could do language arts,
all I needed was to believe!
Believe in myself and do my best.
Now I love language arts,
you know it was all her wits.
I didn't really do it all by myself,
I had a little help from a teacher,
that to this very day,
I really cannot say,
how much my teacher helped me,
when I was in fourth grade!!!

© Copyright 1999 Sundance - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
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1 posted 1999-07-19 02:12 PM


Very nice tribute to what seems a wonderful teacher, Sundance! I'm sure she would have liked it!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."


Sundance
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since 1999-07-11
Posts 123

2 posted 1999-07-19 02:21 PM


Thanks for the reply, nobody hardly ever replies to my poetry. Therefore, I apriciate the reply very much.


Sundance
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since 1999-07-11
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3 posted 1999-07-19 09:35 PM


U GUYS r the 2nd ones to read this, please give me some feedback!


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