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4th grade memories

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Sundance
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0 posted 07-19-99 02:10 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

On Febuary 21,
something made a burst!
Someone who I loved very much,
had something happen, that made a hush!
Over all our school you could only see,
a pool of tears, which I hated it to be.
I never thought it would happen so soon,
it came one day just out of the blue.
Although it never really got through me that day,
I knew for a fact that my teacher,
had died that very day.
It was a shock,I'll have to edmit.
Somehow I think it was meant to be,
so she could watch over me!
To see how I'm doing in school anyway,
but to this very day,I really can't say,
how much my teacher helped me to see,
I really could do language arts,
all I needed was to believe!
Believe in myself and do my best.
Now I love language arts,
you know it was all her wits.
I didn't really do it all by myself,
I had a little help from a teacher,
that to this very day,
I really cannot say,
how much my teacher helped me,
when I was in fourth grade!!!
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~one voice~
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1 posted 07-19-99 02:12 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Very nice tribute to what seems a wonderful teacher, Sundance! I'm sure she would have liked it!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Sundance
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2 posted 07-19-99 02:21 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Thanks for the reply, nobody hardly ever replies to my poetry. Therefore, I apriciate the reply very much.

Sundance
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3 posted 07-19-99 09:35 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

U GUYS r the 2nd ones to read this, please give me some feedback!

 
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