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elvira
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0 posted 07-19-99 05:39 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for elvira



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1 posted 07-19-99 05:43 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Nice one Elvira, the flow drew me along with it. Get ICQ or IM, e-mail even. I'd love to talk to you.

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very good! the flow was nice. i like your style

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3 posted 07-19-99 10:02 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Beautiful verse,and so true.I loved it!
elvira
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Andrew Scott
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5 posted 07-19-99 05:18 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Nice twist at the end.
Nothing like the international "date" line to save the perpetually late.
elvira
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7 posted 07-29-99 03:36 AM       View Profile for CastleHoward   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for CastleHoward

Ah yes, those time zones... the curse of the chatting classes

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Elvira,
Beautiful verse. The flow is very smooth and I could not wait to finsih to see what would happen.
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All I can say is Bravo! The poem flowed perfectly right till the very end. It was almost like hearing your favorite song on the radio, before you belt out the first verse it is over.
blueloon
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