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elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

0 posted 1999-07-19 05:39 AM

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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-19 05:43 AM

Nice one Elvira, the flow drew me along with it. Get ICQ or IM, e-mail even. I'd love to talk to you.

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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
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Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 1999-07-19 09:55 AM

very good! the flow was nice. i like your style

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Dragon
Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

3 posted 1999-07-19 10:02 AM

Beautiful verse,and so true.I loved it!

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

4 posted 1999-07-19 04:59 PM

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Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 1999-07-19 05:18 PM

Nice twist at the end.
Nothing like the international "date" line to save the perpetually late.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

6 posted 1999-07-19 06:24 PM

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CastleHoward
Junior Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 20

7 posted 1999-07-29 03:36 AM

Ah yes, those time zones... the curse of the chatting classes

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elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

8 posted 1999-07-29 08:35 AM

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 1999-07-29 09:20 AM

Elvira,
Beautiful verse. The flow is very smooth and I could not wait to finsih to see what would happen.

blueloon
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

10 posted 1999-07-29 09:44 AM

All I can say is Bravo! The poem flowed perfectly right till the very end. It was almost like hearing your favorite song on the radio, before you belt out the first verse it is over.
blueloon

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

11 posted 1999-07-29 09:50 AM

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