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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-07-19 04:20 AM


I'm trying to think of a way to say it,
That wont sound overdone.
Trying make the light of my life
Know she's the only one.

I know that it sounds jaded, seriously,
Truly I really do.
But there are so many things left to say,
When I say I love you.

She makes me think of delightful things,
More than just of her.
Like stealing kisses and angel's wings,
Truly she's my treasure.

I could not write a single romantic verse,
Without some inspiration.
I suffer from a tragic writer's curse,
Insipid desperation.

That inspiration is you, my love, my light,
That brings forth such lovely words.
Thinking of you is daily a cause for delight,
For the way our desires merge.

I watch you leave me, every single day,
My heart crushed in despair.
Yet knowing your coming helps me stay,
Sane and resist despair.

©1999 DreamEvil


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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
DreamEvil©


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~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
1 posted 1999-07-19 04:23 AM


I'm telling you right now, Dream, that special lady is really special to be loved by You!!! Beautiful... but then I already told you that!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."


Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-07-19 04:24 AM


I love it.. I think its sweet, and Romantic

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Dragon
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since 1999-07-14
Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA
3 posted 1999-07-19 04:42 AM


I know how pleased your lady is,Bravo!
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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4 posted 1999-07-19 11:00 AM


Thank you again, dear friends.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 1999-07-19 11:32 AM


I really, really like your new postings.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Moonlight
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA
6 posted 1999-07-19 05:14 PM


sometimes there just isn't enough words to tell someone what you feel...

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
7 posted 1999-07-19 05:25 PM


"I Love You." The three most powerful words known to humankind. You do them honor. That's one lucky lady.
Rita
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540
8 posted 1999-07-19 07:21 PM


I really like the ring to it......very very fortunate lady.
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
9 posted 1999-07-19 07:45 PM


Very nice. Very fortunate lady.

Ohme

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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10 posted 1999-07-19 08:30 PM


I hope she thinks so.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
11 posted 1999-07-19 09:25 PM


Lovely! So, what does your lady love think of that poem about the ladies on the forum? Did she read it yet! Give me her e-mail address and I'll send it to her! (Is this a new, romantic DreamEvil?)
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

12 posted 1999-07-19 09:48 PM


SHHH!! Don't tell anyone! It's a secret. LOLOL
thursdayschild
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 169
Houston, Tx.
13 posted 1999-07-20 07:02 PM


What a completely wonderful poem! Truly
love this one. "angel's wings", reminds me
of something...

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

14 posted 1999-07-20 09:31 PM



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