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My Wish My Angel

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swilke1
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since 07-19-99
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Metamora,IL,USA


0 posted 07-19-99 02:07 AM       View Profile for swilke1   Email swilke1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swilke1

My Wish, My Angel

One summer night
I wished upon a star,
And prayed to God,
To see and angel either close or far

The summers came and went,
The stars began to fall,
The wish I'd wished,
faded and bent

Till the day,
I got my wish,
My prayer was answered,
An Angel came my way

My Wish, My Angel
Is more that an dream
It fills me up,
through all the seems

I feel no pain, and have no fear
When My Angel is near
I wished my wish, and prayed to God,
That one summer night

And here you are
My Wish, My Angel


**this is only my second poem so suggestions are recommended***
thank-you for looking
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elvira
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since 07-06-99
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1 posted 07-19-99 02:11 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

sweet contend...(do you read your poetry aloud to "proof read" so to speak?...that's my only advice...hope you don't mind constructive criticism)...looking forward to more postings from you

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


Saxoness
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2 posted 07-19-99 10:08 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

very nice, innocent thoughts sometimes make the best poems,.........although, proofreading is often neccessary.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot
swilke1
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Metamora,IL,USA


3 posted 07-19-99 10:06 PM       View Profile for swilke1   Email swilke1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swilke1

Thank-you for the input. i will take it as it comes. That is how it happened. I gave it a try. I will try again someday. Thanks again for reading it.
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