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Letter to My Ladies

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-18-99 09:10 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I have never felt loved so strongly,
As I do when I'm with you.
I stumbled through my life so blindly,
Close to bidding this life adieu.

Then by random chat and happenstance,
Some old yearnings did arise.
A friend showed me the forum by chance,
Now I live for the replies.

The first of them I met was one voice,
A true lady, mild and sweet.
After I knew her I had no choice,
My heart admitted defeat.

Azblond has been there for me you know,
Despite my being impure.
Sometimes she reminds me of a doe,
Skittish, nervous and unsure.

The next would be a true kindred soul,
A beauty in her own right.
Isabelle, Izzy, or so I'm told,
Don't lose that girlish delight.

My newest Lady is Saxoness,
She will be a lovely friend.
I met her today I must confess,
Any more on her will depend.

There is but one more tale to be told,
a verse for my protege.
The delight of my night, Gentle Soul,
who brightens my life each day.

Lastly, we come to Lady deVine,
Grande dame of erotic verse.
Her words hit the brain like a dry wine,
Leaving you with greater thirst.

For any I've forgotten to craft rhyme,
It fills me with such sorrow.
It was not for lack of time,
You'll have one on the morrow.

©1999 DreamEvil


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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
DreamEvil©



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-18-99).]
© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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1 posted 07-18-99 09:17 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

A very nice tribute, DreamEvil!

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*


Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-18-99 09:20 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is by far your best! (Though I take exception to being called 'yours'!) Be careful, you may have to change your name to DreamSweet if this trend keeps up! (Thank you for including me.)

Sunshine
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3 posted 07-18-99 09:22 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Not that I'm expecting
any words so fine
but now you know I'm looking
and you'll be on my mind.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Saxoness
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4 posted 07-18-99 09:58 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

thank you........what else can I say? Not sure how to accept it. Hope you understand me.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot
~one voice~
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5 posted 07-18-99 10:29 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Wonderful tribute Dream...well said. ~one voice~
Balladeer
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6 posted 07-18-99 10:56 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A very nice tribute, Dream.
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7 posted 07-18-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

*hugs*
Ohme
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8 posted 07-19-99 12:38 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Very nice. I like the way you addressed the situation, with no sense of betraying one by moving on to the other. And of course you promise to include anyone who feels left out no later than tomorrow. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Ohme
DreamEvil
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9 posted 07-19-99 12:42 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you and thanks to deVine,
somehow she found the time,
to help me organize my rhyme.
elvira
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10 posted 07-19-99 02:04 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

DreamEvil the romantic?...i must say, i like both sides of you

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


Dragon
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11 posted 07-19-99 02:51 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Very Nice! More please!!
DreamEvil
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12 posted 07-19-99 03:40 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Talk about ROCKING!! This one surprises the bejesus out of me.
IsabelleSkye
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I am flattered that you included me, and even more by your rhyme! *blush*
What a sweetie you are
I see no evil here I fear....
What I see and hear
all lead me to believe
that you are sweet DreamEvil
(ok ok ok I can't rhyme, but it was the thought that counts!!! eh? )
*hugs*
Izzy

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Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads.....Henry David Thoreau
DreamEvil
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14 posted 07-19-99 09:51 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

As unforgettable as you are, Izzy, I couldn't leave you out.

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-19-99).]
JP
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15 posted 07-19-99 10:22 PM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Forced. Well felt, well meant, and well thought in some places, although overall, it was forced.
DreamEvil
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16 posted 07-19-99 10:34 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Forced, how so? The feelings are genuine, each verse describes the object well. Perhaps you merely write in a different style. I appreciate the comments and will look into your work with equal depth and scrutiny.
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