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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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O God, is this me? Is this the essence of my dreams? I hoped of Forever, Forever in your grace On the darkened earth I breathed by your light Your truth set me free Yet Lord, where is freedom now? I hear the sea I feel the breeze I see the waves The casts of your love I long to be one with the glittering sand to live the ocean and emit the cry of the gull with my own voice to be, to breathe with the world you have made Instead I walk alone a solitary figure of fallen man (1996) |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I am very impressed. It's amazing what people can come up with, is it not? I applaud you ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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SiO2 Junior Member
since 2002-06-05
Posts 24New Zealand |
All humanity must walk alone, though friends be close beside, But if you truly are alone… you have no need to hide! PS thanks for the kind words on my poem. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
pretty fair for a lass of 21ish  J |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Man, I cant believe Im reading poetry, that is THIS old.. Just amazes me..  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
~hides head in shame~ ~chants '1996 1996 1996 1996'~ make.this.go.away...  K |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
about time to title this isn't it dear? JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
UNTITLED seems a genuine title, I thought... 1996? regards sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
You may be right Sudhir, I can't decide JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hmmmm.... You've been around awhile, eh??...  |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
There must a story behind this, a piece of history, or her story? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Laoha...her story has grown.  |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
Very nice!!! Im kiwi girl as well! havent seen many of them round! I really like this one and agree with what everyone else has sed keep rockin  darknessYou can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"to live the ocean and emit the cry of the gull with my own voice" I love the passion of this piece. It's so nice to read your words. Lots of love from Pennsylvania Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
ahem...see reply 5. But...I still have to say - thank you - for continuing to read all of these old things of mine, friends. Lizzy...I was telling Martie just yesterday that I missed you. I know she's seeing you soon...I hope you're well, dear...  K |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So - Wanna meet us in Pottstown for lunch??... Reading your poem again now...  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Got a spare 2 grand?  HUGS.. far away K |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
the house ate it ( the 2k) J |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
that's not a good enough reason J-pooh. Your pain'ing just ain't my problem.. anyway, I was talking to Nan.. heh.. K |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
1996! Kamla, you certainly have come into your own in poetry since that time  and so if I beg, how's about a poem lady? |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
yeah, how 'bout it? There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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