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Severn
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0 posted 07-18-99 07:36 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

O God, is this me?
Is this the essence of my dreams?
I hoped of Forever,
Forever in your grace
On the darkened earth
I breathed by your light
Your truth set me free
Yet Lord, where is freedom now?

I hear the sea
I feel the breeze
I see the waves
The casts of your love
I long to be one
with the glittering sand
to live the ocean and
emit the cry of the gull
with my own voice
to be, to breathe
with the world you have made

Instead I walk alone
a solitary figure of fallen man

(1996)
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 07-18-99 07:46 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I am very impressed. It's amazing what people can come up with, is it not? I applaud you

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot
SiO2
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2 posted 07-04-2002 10:39 AM       View Profile for SiO2   Email SiO2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SiO2

All humanity must walk alone, though friends be close beside,
But if you truly are alone… you have no need to hide!
PS thanks for the kind words on my poem.
Jamie
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3 posted 02-28-2003 11:42 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

pretty fair for a lass of 21ish

J
Connel
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4 posted 03-14-2003 07:46 PM       View Profile for Connel   Email Connel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Connel

Man, I cant believe Im reading poetry, that is THIS old.. Just amazes me..

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

Severn
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5 posted 03-14-2003 11:59 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

~hides head in shame~

~chants '1996 1996 1996 1996'~

make.this.go.away...

K
Jamie
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6 posted 06-17-2003 11:05 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

about time to title this isn't it dear?


J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 06-18-2003 09:31 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

UNTITLED seems a genuine title, I thought...

1996?

regards
sudhir
Jamie
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8 posted 07-05-2003 03:37 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

You may be right Sudhir, I can't decide  

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Nan
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9 posted 07-05-2003 07:01 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hmmmm.... You've been around awhile, eh??...
Laoha
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10 posted 01-23-2004 10:57 AM       View Profile for Laoha   Email Laoha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laoha

There must a story behind this, a piece of history, or her story?

Laoha's Pen

Chinapoet

Sunshine
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11 posted 01-23-2004 08:36 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Laoha...her story has grown.
darkness_witch
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12 posted 02-07-2004 05:35 PM       View Profile for darkness_witch   Email darkness_witch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for darkness_witch

Very nice!!!

Im kiwi girl as well!
havent seen many of them round!

I really like this one and agree with what everyone else has sed

keep rockin

darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 02-28-2004 09:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

"to live the ocean and
emit the cry of the gull
with my own voice"

I love the passion of this piece.
It's so nice to read your words.

Lots of love from Pennsylvania
Liz
Severn
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14 posted 02-29-2004 12:32 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

ahem...see reply 5.



But...I still have to say - thank you - for continuing to read all of these old things of mine, friends.

Lizzy...I was telling Martie just yesterday that I missed you. I know she's seeing you soon...I hope you're well, dear...

K
Nan
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15 posted 02-29-2004 06:51 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

So - Wanna meet us in Pottstown for lunch??... Reading your poem again now...
Severn
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16 posted 02-29-2004 11:53 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Got a spare 2 grand?

HUGS..

far away K
Jamie
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17 posted 04-19-2004 09:57 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

the house ate it ( the 2k)

J
Severn
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18 posted 04-20-2004 03:03 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

that's not a good enough reason J-pooh. Your pain'ing just ain't my problem..

anyway, I was talking to Nan..

heh..

K
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19 posted 08-23-2005 01:06 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

1996!  Kamla, you certainly have come into your own in poetry since that time and so if I beg, how's about a poem lady?
Jamie
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20 posted 09-29-2005 12:08 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

yeah, how 'bout it?

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

 
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