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dimples22
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0 posted 07-18-99 05:46 PM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

Your beautiful,
not because of your features
nor because of your smile,
Your just beautiful.

Your beautiful,
not because of the unspoken promise of love
nor because you shine like a star from up above,
Your just beautiful.

Your beautiful,
not because your essence makes me laugh
nor when you look at me with those tear stained eyes.
Your just beautiful.

Your beautiful
because everyday I wake up to see you
and I never grow tired of your lovely face

Your beautiful because you have filled my life with warmth and grace.
I love you more for all the flaws you have
because you have made my life beautiful again.

Thank you
Your beautiful.
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dimples22
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1 posted 07-18-99 05:58 PM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

I really did enjoy writing this one but it's not for a lover, it's for my beautiful mother. I hope everyone has someone their life who they feel this way about.
Ohme
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2 posted 07-18-99 06:54 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I am guilty of preconcieved notions that at times send me off in the wrong direction. I was seeing a romantic relationship not parent and child. Then you got me back on the right track. So I read it again and yep, that's exactly what it was.

Thanks
Ohme
dimples22
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3 posted 07-18-99 07:18 PM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

Ohme if you feel it's for a romantic relationship then it is, regardless of who it was written for it's nice to know that it inspired somekind of feeling in you, thanks.

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I'm not a writer, just an observer of detail, lol.
~one voice~
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4 posted 07-18-99 07:22 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Definitely a "beautiful" poem! I really liked it...can I show it to my own mother? Thanks once again, dimps for sharing your talent! ~one voice~
dimples22
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5 posted 07-18-99 07:26 PM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

You can do whatever you like, lol, thanks one voice for supporting me when others can't or will not.
dimples21
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6 posted 07-19-99 12:53 AM       View Profile for dimples21   Email dimples21   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for dimples21

Good job sis, You have talent ,keep it up(I still say I am better,lol)
Alwye
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7 posted 07-19-99 12:58 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful...I feel like this about my best friends. Truly a piece that can be felt in so many different ways. Great job!
Alwye
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8 posted 07-19-99 12:59 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful...I feel like this about my best friends. Truly a piece that can be felt in so many different ways. Great job!

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


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dimples22
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9 posted 07-19-99 01:31 AM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

Thank you for all of the support.
swilke1
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10 posted 07-19-99 02:24 AM       View Profile for swilke1   Email swilke1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swilke1

I thought it was wonderful. It made me think of the ones that I love. I want my moter and grandmother to see it. It will give them a smile and a piece mind. I think that my friend needs it too. She is truely a Beautiful person.

Thank you for the memories it brought back.
swilke1
dimples22
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11 posted 07-19-99 02:56 AM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

I'm so happy t the response I'm getting to this poem, honestly I thought no one would care.

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I'm not a writer, just an observer of detail, lol.
dimples22
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12 posted 07-19-99 02:48 PM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

To everyone who reads this, I made a grave error in putting down that no one would care, some people do.
 
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