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Saxoness
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0 posted 1999-07-18 03:44 PM


ALONE

I am alone.
Yet, I am not alone.
Time and people whirl around me
In a circle of emotion.
Yet I do not feel it.
I reach out to people,
But never far enough.
I cry out for comfort,
But no one hears me.
My tears fall like rain,
But no one feels them.
I give signs of my pain,
But no one sees them.
The world surrounds me,
Yet I am alone.
I am alone.

~Angela Erin Burke~


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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

© Copyright 1999 Angela Erin Burke - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 1999-07-18 03:46 PM


my first poem.........borne with ignorence, but born with pain
Saxoness
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2 posted 1999-07-18 03:46 PM


my first poem.........borne with ignorence, but born with pain

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

DreamEvil
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3 posted 1999-07-18 07:44 PM


Heart-wrenching loneliness, my favorite drink.

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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
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~one voice~
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4 posted 1999-07-18 07:49 PM


Saxoness, very emotional! I have enjoyed your work that I have seen so far! Looking forward to more! ~one voice~
Saxoness
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5 posted 1999-07-19 01:13 AM


thank you all very much

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Alwye
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6 posted 1999-07-19 01:18 AM


Wonderful, a feeling I have known all too well in my life. Nice job.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*



Dragon
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7 posted 1999-07-19 04:53 AM


Great mind think alike.Very touching.
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