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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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KINDEST WORDS Those sorrowful words, You spoke to me, Telling me goodbye, I fear my dear, Were quite clear, But ne'er once did I cry. Those words my love, That you said with triumph, Hoping to cut me to the quick, I'm sorry to say, That on that fine day, I laughed so much I got sick! Those bitter words, You threw at me, Leaving me forever, Made me regret, Not one thing yet! And made my life all the better. Those sorrowful words, I say were the kindest, For when I remember that day, I know that for certain, I'm a much better person, For letting you go away. ~ Angela Erin Burke~ ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Well said. I detected a growth that exploded into new found contentment I enjoyed the Kindest Words. [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 07-18-99).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent poem. "letting you go away"...well said indeed!  |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Very nice, so u r a new member? Have u had a good time yet? I always do. Keep up the good work!!!  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Very well written. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
thank you all. |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
Good Work! |
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