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lenny Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 63front royal, va. u.s.a. |
Thought, borne on etheric mists Illumining the night Filling consciousness, guiding soul Where journey we tonight, oh Cosmic Navigator Stilling waves of delusion Diving deep 'neath their incessant motion Shield me from winds of ignorance Impart but a fragment of Thine ineffable wisdom For Thy child is consumed of Highest hunger. Poured from Thy bosom forth Fill my thirsty soul dear Friend With draft of Divine Realization Raise me up in lofty thought With humility my strength Make noble all my aims. With the bright light of Thy love Rend the dark veil of seperateness from Thee 'Till I again realize our Oneness. Oh, Mother Divine, reveal Thy wondrous Self That my tears may forever cease In bliss of Cosmic Awareness. ------------------ lenny |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow,Excellent, I loved the deep expression you exibited. |
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lenny Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 63front royal, va. u.s.a. |
Thank you Lost Dreamer. I receive very few comments in this forum. Probably this is for two reasons: 1. My poetry is not circumscribed, making it difficult for many to take the time to understand and appreciate what I am saying. 2. I am not a part of the clique. I have noticed that every poetry site has its little clique where a select few receive multitudinous comments and compliments no matter what they write and the rest are pretty much ignored. This in not to take away from the poets who deserve such recognition, but simply an observation. I will continue to bare my soul no matter what the response or lack thereof. Smile... ------------------ lenny |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Lenny, I at times feel the same way, but if you do look even some of the people who get a lot of responses also have some that have a zero near them. The fun thing to do is go to the old pages and look for those poets that's work does not have many responses, and read and respond to them. It gives that poet a boost to the front and keeps the circle going around. Please keep posting you have a wonderful talent. Patience is the key when you have as many family members as we do here. |
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AWhere New Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 4Eastern Shore, USA |
I am really impressed by your writing. This is a powerful piece. |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Those who do take the time to analyze your meanings and expressions will find an excellent talent behind them. Thank you for sharing them. |
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