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Siamese Twins

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lenny
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0 posted 07-18-99 11:05 AM       View Profile for lenny   Email lenny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lenny

As Siamese twins--insep'rable
Do time and space take stage
As diff'rent spaces co-exist
So time--both on and off of stage.
Minds spotlight limits what we see
And yet the rest is there
The darkness only hides it 'till
It turn is then and there.
Or here and now, it's all the same
Save that the lights now on
Directing consciousness to points
That in the dark seem gone.


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Christina Myers
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1 posted 07-18-99 12:12 PM       View Profile for Christina Myers   Email Christina Myers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Christina Myers's Home Page   View IP for Christina Myers

This one is nice, but it doesn't seem finished Was there more that you cut?
Thank you for sharing it with us,though.

Christina


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And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda
lenny
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2 posted 07-18-99 02:13 PM       View Profile for lenny   Email lenny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lenny

No more. No less. The point was encapsulated in the lines that were delivered. Thank you for your response though. Smile...

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3 posted 07-28-99 08:03 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

Time and space as siamese twins.... wonderful metaphor. I found this over on page 16 and thought it worthy of moving up front for more comments. Very fine writing, mr. lenny!

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