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Round and Round
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Round and round I'm spinning don't know where I'm going lost in rage and fear of THIS the more I need you, the farther away from me you go who are you anymore? I don't know you anymore I'm left more lonely than I was before I met you where is our love? where is our house? where is our dog? where is the backyard for the children to play? you promised me these things long ago... you vowed to love me till your life's end, and ever-after but it seems you only live next to me...not with me...not in love with me why don't you love me? why don't you love me? you can tell me you do, but I don't believe you you lie to yourself and you lie to me you don't love me you cause my tears you cause my fears don't waste my years I have so much to give but you take it for granted so should I leave? why can't I leave? why can't I leave? I know why I know why I gave myself to you and there is nothing left but tears that drown the years as they go by I always think my eyes will run dry but they never do...always tears for you I once believed that we were soul-mates... I don't understand... where did you go? You used to hold me and you felt so warm- I felt so safe... all my troubles faded away... Now, I rush in to your arms to find them closed to me My inner-child wants her mommy... you hurt me so much- do you even understand? I would hurt without you and I hurt with you so where does that leave me? where does that leave me? leaves me lost spinning where am I going? round and round... ------------------ ©~onevoice~ "There are chords in the hearts of the most wreckless which cannot be touched without emotion." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I'm sorry you've been caused such pain. I'll do what I can to help. Marvelous way of expressing yourself, by the way. ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
Very Moving,I can feel the pain and confusion.Good work! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, you did a wonderful job expressing your feelings in a very touching way. I hope you soon are able to reach deep into your significant other, and bring the relationship to everlasting bliss. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Me too Lost Dreamer, me too...thanks for your encouragement! ~one voice~ |
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