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~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


0 posted 07-18-99 09:13 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Round and round
I'm spinning
don't know where I'm going
lost in rage and fear of THIS
the more I need you,
the farther away from me you go
who are you anymore?
I don't know you anymore
I'm left more lonely than I was before
I met you
where is our love?
where is our house?
where is our dog?
where is the backyard for the children to play?
you promised me these things long ago...
you vowed to love me till your life's end,
and ever-after
but it seems you only live next to me...not with me...not in love with me
why don't you love me?
why don't you love me?
you can tell me you do,
but I don't believe you
you lie to yourself and you lie to me
you don't love me
you cause my tears
you cause my fears
don't waste my years
I have so much to give but you take it for granted
so should I leave?
why can't I leave?
why can't I leave?
I know why
I know why
I gave myself to you and there is nothing left but tears
that drown the years
as they go by
I always think my eyes will run dry
but they never do...always tears for you

I once believed that we were soul-mates...

I don't understand...
where did you go?
You used to hold me and you felt so warm-
I felt so safe...
all my troubles faded away...
Now, I rush in to your arms to find them closed to me
My inner-child wants her mommy...
you hurt me so much-
do you even understand?
I would hurt without you
and I hurt with you
so where does that leave me?
where does that leave me?
leaves me lost
spinning
where am I going?
round and round...


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"There are chords in the hearts of the most wreckless which cannot be touched without emotion."


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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-18-99 09:53 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I'm sorry you've been caused such pain. I'll do what I can to help. Marvelous way of expressing yourself, by the way.

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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
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Dragon
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since 07-14-99
Posts 139
Highmount,NY ,USA


2 posted 07-18-99 09:57 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Very Moving,I can feel the pain and confusion.Good work!
Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
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Normal, Illinois


3 posted 07-18-99 02:50 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Wow, you did a wonderful job expressing your feelings in a very touching way. I hope you soon are able to reach deep into your significant other, and bring the relationship to everlasting bliss.
~one voice~
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4 posted 07-18-99 07:33 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Me too Lost Dreamer, me too...thanks for your encouragement! ~one voice~
 
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