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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-18-99 03:42 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Ladies are like fine diamonds, each with
a different cut and brilliance all her own.
With avid care my imagination will reach to
Compare them to that glittering stone.

When you enter a jewelry store, look about,
See the wonders to be found.
Sparkling desire and radiant fire spin out
In a web that holds you spellbound.

Color, clarity, cut, so many things to decide
Before you make your choice.
With so many pretty pleasures, I must confide
They speak to me with one voice.

Only one diamond will ever catch your eye,
On that you may depend.
Hold your lover tightly, tell her nightly why,
Your love she does transcend.

©1999DreamEvil


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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
DreamEvil©



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-18-99).]
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~one voice~
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1 posted 07-18-99 03:45 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

This would make any woman swoon! I'm sure I'm not the only one out there! Dream, your words are so beautiful whether they be dark or light...they all come from your heart. Which must mean, love, that you have a truly beautiful soul. ~one voice~

[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 07-18-99).]
azblond
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2 posted 07-18-99 03:49 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Now you are talking! As the woman of the world I am (hah...like anyone believes that for a second!!), this speaks so totaly to my heart, giving me respect for you like never before. This is such a turn from your "vicious females" side we saw a few days ago, my hope in you renewed once more. See...even the Dark sparkles in Moonlight!Bravo my friend...Bravo!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...


DreamEvil
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3 posted 07-18-99 03:52 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I did good then?
azblond
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4 posted 07-18-99 03:57 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

*pat on the head* you did REAL good honey!!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...


Dragon
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5 posted 07-18-99 05:08 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

You did very good!!!!! Loved it!
DreamEvil
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6 posted 07-18-99 10:01 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you all.
Poet deVine
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7 posted 07-18-99 10:43 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is good I hope you keep stretching your talent into different directions. We should all vary our style now and then. One sign of a good poet is that he/she can be diverse! Dont' abandon that which is dear to your heart (darkness), but don't be afraid to spread your wings!
Saxoness
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8 posted 07-18-99 12:50 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

This poem is quite good..........only one thing about it bothers me........(actually 2) the last word in the last line od stanza 2, spellbound, seems to fit oddly. not sure why. also, the thoughts are a bit fractured, the stanzas are not concentrated. However. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, if it is what you were going for. I'm just used to a more even flow. As far as individual stanzas, the flow is superb. Very, very nice. I like it!
Lost Dreamer
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9 posted 07-18-99 01:17 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I liked this one, I was not gonna read it at first cause I thought maybe you wrote on the dark side which personally does not appeal to me, but that's just me I am only one person. I am glad I decided to open this one and read it, you did a wonderful job in your descriptions.
dimples22
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10 posted 07-18-99 04:07 PM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

Now why can't I find a man who can write something like that for me. LOL, you did a terrific job.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


11 posted 07-18-99 06:48 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Simply refreshing. I'm looking forward to yet more from your vast wealth of insight.
DreamEvil
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12 posted 07-18-99 07:53 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil


Thank you, all of you.
Moonlight
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13 posted 07-18-99 10:47 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

Very nice, Dreamevil. I like it. The last stanza is my favorite by far.... good advice too.

~m~
DreamEvil
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14 posted 07-19-99 12:32 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you, dear ladies, one and all,
for hearing the call
of desire that lead me
to be inspired.

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-19-99).]
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