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Severn
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0 posted 07-17-99 09:50 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

it whispers, turns
and follows

it shutters, calls
and swallows

it binds, it grieves
with ever-need

it twists and dances
and bleeds
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-17-99 09:54 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Your poem has some wonderful phrases and I look forward to reading more from you.
Janus
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2 posted 07-17-99 09:56 PM       View Profile for Janus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janus

What a musical poem! I often think that truly good poetry is much like music, with rhythm and power, and eloquence.
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3 posted 07-17-99 09:58 PM       View Profile for fjones   Email fjones   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fjones

Great poem!
I like short and to the heart


Severn
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4 posted 07-17-99 09:58 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Thanks for the welcome. Poetry is the language I wish we could all communicate in.
Severn
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5 posted 10-21-1999 03:17 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Chris - I stuck this up again because this was my first post - needless to say it is completely irrelevant now!
Jamie
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6 posted 04-01-2001 10:04 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Ahhhh ,, see in the beginning you were a rhymer---lovely one too...

"Or, like the thief of fire from heaven,
Wilt thou withstand the shock?
And share with him - the unforgiven-
His vulture and his rock?"
"lord byro

Severn
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7 posted 05-06-2001 10:19 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Jamie I rhymed..hmm...cause it sounded nice haha...I wrote this on a scrap of paper at a bus stop...

I threw it up on passions as my first post solely because when I found this place I was at someone else's house and could remember this off the top of my head...

never a rhymer by heart...wow, I can't believe how long ago this was...

hugs dear

K

All obscurity starts with a danger:
Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury
Sylvia Plath

Dark Angel
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8 posted 05-17-2001 10:21 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

heheheh

you a rhymer as well
now I didnt know that hmmmmm

nice, hon very nice.  

Severn
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9 posted 05-17-2001 11:24 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I AM NOT A RHYMER!

I PROTEST!

This was a once off ~sulk~

Heh...love you two...

K

Jamie
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10 posted 05-17-2001 11:56 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Hi-- my name is Kamla-- and I once wrote in Rhyme--- but it seems I lost the ability and can no longer do it....heh

love ya hon

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Severn
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11 posted 05-18-2001 12:05 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I lost the ability when I read all the rhyme YOU two produced...hmm...

HAH

HAHAHAHAH

love you too dear...

ROTF

yes I know that was a cheap shot and means I can't come up with anything better - don't tell anyone

K
Jamie
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12 posted 05-19-2001 03:02 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

As long as we have already abused this thread...
err-- you can't see it.. but it didnt work...heh



There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

[This message has been edited by Jamie (edited 05-19-2001).]

Severn
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13 posted 06-04-2001 03:15 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

What on earth was the point of THAT????
Siofra
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14 posted 12-11-2001 04:28 AM       View Profile for Siofra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Siofra

Yes..it certainly does! enjoyed!  

I am many.

Jamie
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15 posted 07-16-2004 09:56 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

An anniversary bump for this your introductory poem to passions. If not for this, your first, we would never have been graced with the wonderful words to come. We may not come here as much as before, nor even have the need for it we once shared, there are memories, both bad and good to be found here. God (and Ron) willing we can always visit- if even for a little while.

Love ya heaps lil' tigger k

and always

HK>LK

J
Severn
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16 posted 07-18-2004 06:46 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Susan Caldwell
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17 posted 11-25-2005 02:06 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

wonderfully said.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

 
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