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passion's woe

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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


0 posted 07-17-99 07:30 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

a wisp of a smile on her face
she drew him near for last embrace
it would be faint that he would think
they were to have another drink

she led him on as lovers do
made him think their love was true
he could always be contented fool
she would never break the golden rule

she kissed him on the cheek so light
that all would feel his pain that night
his greed that love would soon be gone
the man had brought some perion

she could see that might her eyes revealed
to him her love were bells that peeled
a dirge for loss in passion woe
another drink and he would go

but the bells would play inside his head
drive him to their passion bed
where sickness wallow in their lust
and stench so vile of broken trust

and who was giving last embrace
who was giving bitter taste
love was all they hoped to find
each had others on their mind

a case to anyone who can tell me how to spell perion i am too glued to the computer to get up and go find out

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-17-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


1 posted 07-17-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Wonderful work Walt! Your work is so honest, and I love that. Thank you for sharing your talent! ~one voice~
DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-17-99 08:26 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Nice to know you you ARE a romantic at heart, walt.

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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
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3 posted 07-17-99 08:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Nicely done, Walt....and it's Dom Perignon. I'll clean off a shelf in anticipation of the coming case.
Dragon
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since 07-14-99
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4 posted 07-17-99 10:38 PM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

As always well done my friend! Bravo!
doreen peri
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since 05-25-99
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5 posted 07-17-99 11:09 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

I wish I had Dom Perignon
To toast your poem and drink 'til dawn!

So here's to you, my cyper friend,
Your poem you give, my eyes I lend.

To read 'bout love with wisp of smile
Has filled my eve with class and style.

A toast to you, Dom Wayoutwalt!
OOPS, champagne's gone! It's not my fault!

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


6 posted 07-18-99 12:20 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

One of your better ones. I especially liked that first line!
Gentle Soul
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since 07-12-99
Posts 274
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7 posted 07-18-99 01:07 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

I love it.. nice touch walt..
azblond
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since 07-01-99
Posts 651
The Steamy Desert


8 posted 07-18-99 06:20 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Woo Hoo... you had my undivided attention for this one Walt.... OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...


 
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