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~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-07-17 07:03 PM


Please don't let me fade ceaselessly in to long-suffering.
Watch over me while I sleep.
Don't let me fall buried beneath nonentity.
Stay within the shadows of my keep.

Fly with me in to oblivion.
Soar with me up to the moon.
Never mind the pain and emotional carrion.
Lover, just keep building my heart to swoon.

Oh, my Angel,love me invariably.
Cleanse my soul of all it's grief.
Forbid my sorrow to restrain me,
and might your kiss be sweet relief?

From the Darkness you have come to me
and you enrapture me with grace.
My Dear, you've undiminished me;
You've made my earth a better place.


©~onevoice~


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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*


© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 1999-07-17 07:37 PM


i am happy with this reading i love your work one and you improve never stagnate
~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
2 posted 1999-07-17 07:41 PM


thank you so much walt! ~one voice~
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-07-17 08:30 PM


Being humbled at every turn, certainly does wonders for my humility.
Your efforts I will never spurn,
God bless your ability.

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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
DreamEvil©


dimples22
Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30

4 posted 1999-07-17 10:34 PM


I liked it girl, I wish you eternal happiness and love, you have been true to me when I haven't been true to myself.
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

5 posted 1999-07-17 10:52 PM


Wow. This is beautiful. I haven't been able to stop reading poetry for the last hour. This forum is the greatest discovery I've made for ages! ( I'd write more of my own, but I'm at someone elses house right now and don't have it any with me). Everyone is so talented. You have a beautiful poetic voice, one voice.
~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
6 posted 1999-07-17 11:57 PM


Thank you Dream, for encouraging me; thanks dimps for being my friend, and thank you Severn, for the very nice compliment! ~one voice~
azblond
Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
7 posted 1999-07-18 03:39 AM


one voice, your words never fail to move me. Girl, you have such a gift, I am so glad I am here to share in it!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...



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