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Little girl lost (Hello is anyone out there)

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Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
Posts 358
USA


0 posted 07-17-99 03:18 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Delores Hall

Little girl lost
Who's only five

Where is my mother?
They sent her away,
Insanity robbed her they say.

With so many children
what could she do?
If only she had known
she had everything to lose.

All the demons she had to fight.
Will she remember the little girl plight?

Not even a card,
Not even a letter.
The little girl ask's why
They say she's better.

The year's roll by.
The little girl don't remember,
Of her mother she lost in sixty-nine of December.

She calls her one day.
And say's we can make this better.

Her mother's reply;
You see,when they sent me away,
I lost my children that day.
So go on now,I'm busy today.
I'm sorry to hear that was all she
could say.

She hangs up the phone and turns to
cry,for the mother she lost in sixty-
nine.

Little girl lost
What will she do?
I don't even think she has a clue.


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Ohme
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1 posted 07-17-99 04:54 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I feel sympathy for the little girl, lost. But I also feel she survives in spite of the disappointment.
Delores Hall
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2 posted 07-19-99 01:45 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Thank you I value your input.
Linda
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since 07-19-99
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Puyallup Wa


3 posted 07-19-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for Linda   Email Linda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Linda

Thank you Delores for replying to mine. I feel for this little girl lost. It is nicely written.

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Lindeee
Starfish
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since 07-20-99
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4 posted 07-20-99 06:42 AM       View Profile for Starfish   Email Starfish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starfish

I can feel for the little girl, abandonment is a very sad thing.
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 07-20-99 06:49 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Very sad poem, very well written.
 
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