No Tears For The Dust That Was Me

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No Tears For The Dust That Was Me

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

0 posted 1999-07-17 03:00 PM

When I have returned to the dust of the earth
and your thoughts ebb and flow through your mind.
Recall I was blessed with both sorrow and joy
and each had its moment in time.
But grieving and tears are the signs of regret
for the things that have been and must be.
I laughed and I cried, I lived til I died
No tears for the dust that was me.

Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

1 posted 1999-07-17 03:27 PM

Keep writing. This ain't all that bad. Pretty good.

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

2 posted 1999-07-17 04:55 PM

I think you said it all....this is very good.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 1999-07-17 05:07 PM

This was wonderful..I plan to have a party at my passing, whether I'm there or not. Very good.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

4 posted 1999-07-17 08:41 PM

I am pleased you found this poem enjoyable.
At times I write concerning an obervation. This was an expression of my opinion.

HM3
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since 1999-07-15

Posts 169
TX

5 posted 1999-07-18 11:22 AM

Very good. I like it! ;-)

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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

6 posted 1999-07-18 01:56 PM

Excellent way to see a complicated circumstance that touches all of our lives at least one time. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2008-04-26 08:22 AM

In loving memory this day of Ina Lorene Meadows~

One tiny teardrop slipped
One tiny teardrop fell
One tiny teardrop was caressed
By this poet who knew you well~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

rimmy_chan87
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since 2008-11-17

Posts 2

8 posted 2008-11-17 08:28 PM

wow,i really liked this poem.

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