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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 1999-07-17 09:24 AM



Taking a pointless trip through my mind just the other day
I thought I’d go the distance, and find an archiac way
to locate my more alien thoughts, tho isolated far
just to see how abstract I’d become, or find if I was par.

In my more detached reflection, I saw my ideas were not godforsaken
albeit antiquated, and slightly foreign, but still could be taken
because they are not inaccessible, just removed from the main stream;
and although detached, could they be from my primeval stream?

So I deny my pensiveness as irrelevant or obscure,
albeit somewhat far off, of that I am sure;
my musings should not be forgotten, or considered extraneous
so I shall post this message here, in this Forum, thus.


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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Genea
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since 1999-06-15
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1 posted 1999-07-17 11:11 AM


Bravo!
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