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Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
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Vinton,Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-07-17 03:53 AM


a creepy shadow, a bump in the night,
a child with fear, demands a light..
alone in the darkness.. not a friend a one..
and outcast with fear, has no fun.
a big muscle man, and abusive guy
to a weak confused woman with fear, shall lie.
sin in the world, sin all around,
a priest with fear will kneel on the ground.
to be alone, to have not a thing
I, with fear... a song I will sing
fear is different for each soul
so cant be described as a whole
each has it own meaning, one or two
what does fear.. mean to you?


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DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-07-17 03:54 AM


Score another one, for Gentle Soul.

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elvira
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since 1999-07-06
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California
2 posted 1999-07-17 03:58 AM


my biggest fear.....a puter problem

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...



Dragon
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since 1999-07-14
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Highmount,NY ,USA
3 posted 1999-07-17 03:59 AM


With you in this world I have no fears.You are awesome!!!
azblond
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since 1999-07-01
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The Steamy Desert
4 posted 1999-07-17 04:00 AM


very thought provoking...I love this one Gentle Soul.

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...



azblond
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The Steamy Desert
5 posted 1999-07-17 04:01 AM


And somehow I forgot to mention ... This is one of your best yet.

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...



Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
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Vinton,Ohio USA
6 posted 1999-07-17 04:07 AM


thank you all.. hehe and thanks dream for all these great topics

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aziza
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7 posted 2007-05-31 02:11 AM


Still raises an interesting question and the poem remains strong ~ glad that I stopped into read it.

A

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