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the final battle.. (saga, sorta ends.. hehe but not completely))

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Gentle Soul
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0 posted 07-16-99 09:58 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gentle Soul

Walking in the tunnel, Darkangel on her left side, and Hope is on her right. looking at her best friends.. in that she did delight!
walking on in the middle of the bridge she looks on the side.. where she did once fall.. almost crying, Gentle Soul pointed at the place.. and said "thats what real pain is" never explaining what she meant holding both her friends hands.. as they help her to the light.. she starts to see love again, and joy and peace, and content! Gentle Soul is Giddy! and she never wants to leave! just as she gets there.. she turns around to see.. Depression and Lust trying to attack her.. just before thier leap.. she yelled and called thier names.. "you have no place in my life.. for I know what not to do.. I know not to hate me, and not to get depressed, not to carry YOU two and leave you on my chest! I am pleased with myself! and you must now leave.. go to the pit.. and rot where you belong!" skimpering and scouring all her foes are gone.. Gentle soul is content.. she has joy in her life, and love at her side. and as she gets settled, she realizes.. that popularity has turned.. for he too was now on her side.. and a new partner was beside her.. twas Innocence... Gentle Soul almost didnt recognize her..

Just before I end this.. I want to explain one part... what Gentle Soul meant was when she talked about true pain.. that it hurt worse to have left Evil, and fallen back in and to leave him once again. Tis easier to sit there.. and hurt in misery. but dont let that defeat you.. for dark is not that great... for Joy and peace and love.. are truly the best of all.

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Gentle Soul
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1 posted 07-16-99 10:05 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

I dont think it is over... but it will be more on the happier side.. unless.. well ya know.. things happen.. but I pray that they dont! hehe

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armanca
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2 posted 07-16-99 10:05 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for armanca

I will have to back and read from the beginning...I only caught the last two. Your very talented...

carman
DreamEvil
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3 posted 07-16-99 10:06 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Mighty powerful wisdom from one so young, suffering does indeed refine the soul. Excellent job dear, I'm proud of you. Now, what next?

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Gentle Soul
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4 posted 07-16-99 10:07 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

Thank you.. the first two are The Pit and he pit part II

I give all the credit away.. to the one and only God above, he has blessed me with what I have..

but ppl here have helped me.. and pulled me out along..

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Gentle Soul
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5 posted 07-16-99 10:10 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

hmmm what now? well.. I hope happiness for a long long time.. hehe.. but I will continue writing

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Dragon
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6 posted 07-16-99 10:32 PM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Your journey has taught you well.My all learn it so well.Beautifully done Sweetie!
Balladeer
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Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! A wonderful story with lessons we can all learn from. Thank you, Gentle Soul, for taking us along with you. I wish you only happiness and peace.
Gentle Soul
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8 posted 07-16-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

thank you balladeer.. and I hope everyone DOES learn a lesson from my mistakes.. that way they wont have to take the pain I have had to live with

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