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HM3
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since 1999-07-15
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0 posted 1999-07-16 09:37 PM


There's a hole in my soul, where you used to be
Try as I might, I can't console me
Once was a time you filled me with light
Now though I shine it's never as bright

I've whispered, I've screamed, I've run out of words
Speaking in hopes my voice would be heard
Not thru your ears, I could easily do that
There's a hole in my soul, and I can't go back

I need you, I want you to hold me as before
To fly with me and dream, to open the door
Fill me with your laughter that comes from the heart
I want to go home again and that's not smart

I long for the magic that came with your hugs
A strong secure feeling, I believed in your love
It held me up to the light when it was too dark to see
But you are my soul mate that never will be

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...

© Copyright 1999 Mark Ozee - All Rights Reserved
armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
1 posted 1999-07-16 10:09 PM


this reminded me of something...I think of how great it will be when the right "one" comes along, seeing that i wanted to stay with the wrong "one" so bad. Yet everyone interprets differently. Well done...

carman

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-08-09 02:15 AM


so very sad...a wonderful piece.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

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