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Obscure at Best

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0 posted 07-16-99 08:51 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

When writing I try not to be
dim, or vague, or filled with uncertainty
tho my indistinctness sometimes comes through
it was not to hide anything from you.

Sometimes, of course, Iím indefinable,
ambiguous, shadowy and deep
but my unclear thoughts are not concealed
or in darkness shall you I keep.

And my remote ways when talking of oblivion
keep you doubtful nevertheless;
but never fear, Iím not double-faced
Iím just known for my fuzziness.
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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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1 posted 07-17-99 11:17 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

good but last line of 2nd stanza sounds forced.
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