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Andrew Scott
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0 posted 07-16-99 06:00 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Andrew Scott

This virgin quill given into your care
Awaits the stroke of your delicate hand;
To bestow a world we two can share
Though I stand on a distant foreign land.

Fill it with the sweetness of your every thought,
That I may taste your words upon my lips.
Speak to it your days, nights, dreams and desires,
So that the veil of distance trembles and slips.

Paint your world in the words of your heart
With every hue of your radiant soul.
Draw me closer to your light, though apart
With your touch, pen and ink will keep us whole.
© Copyright 1999 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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1 posted 07-16-99 06:31 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

my dear luv everso far apart...write i shall to reach his
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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...




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hoot_owl_rn
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Andrew, what a wonderful piece of work you have written here...thank you for sharing it.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Poet deVine
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Lovely!
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 07-16-99 07:26 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Thank you all so very much. Elvira: I like the heart. Hoot: My pleasure to do so. Ms. deVine: Your one word is a treasure unto itself.
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5 posted 07-16-99 07:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Each letter you send will go straight to my heart
And lessen the distance that keeps us apart.
I'll read them with pleasure and pray for the day
We can both throw our pencils and paper away.

Sorry, Andrew. You got me in a romantic mood. Uh, not you, personally, you understand, I mean the poem and...aw, you know what I mean! Nicely written.



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Andrew Scott
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6 posted 07-17-99 02:25 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Sir Balladeer: I'm glad I could strike a cord in a heart such as yours. Doubly so that it wasn't in just such that way. I have a feeling that to many women would be heartsick to hear such news.
Thanks for the kudos, and what would be a very good addition to the piece.
 
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