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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
This virgin quill given into your care Awaits the stroke of your delicate hand; To bestow a world we two can share Though I stand on a distant foreign land. Fill it with the sweetness of your every thought, That I may taste your words upon my lips. Speak to it your days, nights, dreams and desires, So that the veil of distance trembles and slips. Paint your world in the words of your heart With every hue of your radiant soul. Draw me closer to your light, though apart With your touch, pen and ink will keep us whole. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
my dear luv everso far apart...write i shall to reach his  ------------------ Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... [This message has been edited by elvira (edited 07-16-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Andrew, what a wonderful piece of work you have written here...thank you for sharing it. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Thank you all so very much. Elvira: I like the heart. Hoot: My pleasure to do so. Ms. deVine: Your one word is a treasure unto itself. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Each letter you send will go straight to my heart And lessen the distance that keeps us apart. I'll read them with pleasure and pray for the day We can both throw our pencils and paper away. Sorry, Andrew. You got me in a romantic mood. Uh, not you, personally, you understand, I mean the poem and...aw, you know what I mean! Nicely written.  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 08-03-99).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Balladeer: I'm glad I could strike a cord in a heart such as yours. Doubly so that it wasn't in just such that way. I have a feeling that to many women would be heartsick to hear such news. Thanks for the kudos, and what would be a very good addition to the piece. |
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