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What is your forever?

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mia
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0 posted 07-16-99 01:29 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mia

I try to see inside you
to think your thoughts
to feel your love
I need to know
what you dream of
when I close my eyes
later than now
are we
the two of us
is it
for sure
can I trust you
with my heart
what is your forever?


[This message has been edited by mia (edited 07-16-99).]
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armanca
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1 posted 07-16-99 05:13 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for armanca

mia,
I loved this poem. This describes exactly how I feel with my new boyfriend...after breaking off a 4 year relationship with another. It makes you wonder about promising forever...and what it means to each person.

carman
blueloon
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2 posted 07-16-99 05:16 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

everyone's forever has a diferent timeline. Scary isn't it? I enjoy your work mia.
blueloon
Andrew Scott
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3 posted 07-16-99 05:37 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

A simple poem with a complex question. Well presented. My answer to she who holds my heart: "I love you forever, a time that will never come."
Mokagrl14
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4 posted 07-16-99 08:33 PM       View Profile for Mokagrl14   Email Mokagrl14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mokagrl14

Thats a great poem, Mia. Ur a bright poet!


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Sundance
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5 posted 07-16-99 08:39 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Very wonderful poem! It expresses the way I feel sometimes with people. Keep up the good work!!!:0

armanca
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6 posted 07-16-99 10:33 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for armanca

Just had to write again. I asked my boyfriend (hope you don't mind, "what is your forever?" He said, "My forever is in you."
 
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