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Pavlov's Dog is Dying

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justin
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since 07-13-99
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Pittsburgh, PA USA


0 posted 07-16-99 10:01 AM       View Profile for justin   Email justin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for justin

Alarm on the bedstand
hit the snooze and
sleep five more
climb slowly out of
sleep, walk slowly
to the shower
turn it on
turn it cold
freeze a little in the morning

you hated being cold

I wear my hair
the way you hate it
wear the shirt you never liked
you said contacts make my
eyes look bluer
I grab my glasses from my
desk and walk
downstairs
and Pavlov's dog is
dying
Pavlov's dog is
dead
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Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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1 posted 07-17-99 02:53 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Good name for the poem. I'm not a expert and
I haven't been writing for a long time.

But I think when writing you want to grab the
reader's attention. You want to make them think or laugh or feel some emotion.Keep on writing.
Sally S.
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since 06-07-99
Posts 887
Ohio


2 posted 07-17-99 05:07 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I know what you were going for...you are getting out of your "conditioned response" mode. Well, ME TOO!!! Pavlov's other experimental dog is dying a QUICK death! LOL!! This poem hits pretty close to home...good job.
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