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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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The birds knew they'd never see As you flew on away from me A love like there was tonight And then you took upon your flight The birds up in the sky Never knew they were to die Like the love we had inside A dove sleeps on the tide |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Oh Walt...this is so beautiful! Very well written...isn't it great how those middle of the night things just come to you???  ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
sigh...short and sweet...I loved this much! ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Eh, wally! You a romantic at heart? Let it out more, your wife will appreciate it. ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
It lovely! |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
I like it alot.. very nice.. hehe..  |
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brockglaze Junior Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 21Muncie,Indiana,USA |
beutiful piece! I loved it! keep pumpin em out, im lovin em all! ------------------ Brock J. Glaze |
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