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Love's reality

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Ominous
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0 posted 07-16-99 01:44 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

You are so close, yet so far away.
You are forever with me, but always gone.
I see you in my dreams, yet not when I awake.
You are here when you need me,
gone when you don't.
I think of you always. Where you are,
what you're doing, if your thinking of me.
You make me so happy, just speaking to you.
But that's not often. I never see you.
But as they say,
Absence makes the heart grow fonder.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-16-99 02:04 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Excellent work! It captures the elusiveness of love nicely.

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Ominous
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2 posted 07-26-99 02:47 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Thank you so much Dream.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
amber
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3 posted 07-30-99 11:10 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

this reminds me of my relationship that im in now in, very well work.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 07-30-99 11:54 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice...but does absence make the heart grow fonder in all reality?
Ominous
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5 posted 08-01-99 08:57 PM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

hoot_owl_rn...thank you for noticing this.
Loves reality is that love blinds you from whats really happening. No absence does not make the heart grow fonder in all circumstances, but that's what this person believes in order to feel better.
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