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Someone I wish to be

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Ominous
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0 posted 07-16-99 12:44 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Life is so different,
Without you by my side.
No one to turn to, no one to lean on,
No one to help me off this ride.

Nothing can top the love of a mother,
Or the strength that she can provide.
It's not something that can be mastered,
By just any teacher or guide.

A mother is like any other,
For the knowledge she can share,
Is none other than true wisdom,
Wrapped in loving care.

A mother is a precious gift,
the greatest gift of all,
For the courage a mother possess,
Never allows her children to fall.

A mother should never be forgotten,
Or ever pushed aside.
For a mother gave you life,
And you should hold her very high.

She walks only beside you,
Never in front nor behind.
She is the truest of all friends,
The best you'll ever find.




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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-16-99 12:47 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is a good one! I've seen your other poems and with this one, you've moved up a notch in the ladder of good poets. Keep up the good work!
DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-16-99 02:07 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I agree with Lady deVine, this is your best I think. Keep at it and keep delighting me.

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Ominous
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3 posted 07-26-99 02:45 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Thank you Poet deVine. One of life's unspoken gifts is the satisfation you get when you learn to improve upon yourself.

And thank you Dream. I'm glad I delight you.
Thank you for your support.

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