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Following the Angels

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elisaseyes
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since 07-15-99
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fort worth texas


0 posted 07-15-99 10:44 PM       View Profile for elisaseyes   Email elisaseyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for elisaseyes

Ssh! Can you hear whispering?
Focus on it, keep on listening
Soft breeze of angels' breath
Describe a love that defies death

Colors do their voices speak
Of a man I am to seek
Hues of red and orange and gold
In this placid place so old

Follow their sweet voices journey
Through this forest a pyre burning
O lead me to an unraped land
Guide me with your gentle hand

Take me to the place where he awaits
Make haste and open wide the gates
Calling to me he keeps his vigil
I'm drawn to him for it is his will

Smoke burned eyes, I hear crackling embers
Evil doth this place remember
Heavy air so thick, so dense
And I the first to be here since

Lo! A clearing in the sky reveals
Sunlight bathes a far off hill
Beauty far too great to speak of
God has breathed upon this place love

Soaring birds and indigo pools
Hidden from corruption of fools
Angels fly from me upon the threshold
"You'll find him where you've been told"

Repose such as the face of a child
Scanning the panorama, my eyes dance wild
Upon a river bank I fix my gaze
He's been waiting there many days

Run to him! faster than my feet will carry me
He spies me coming and rises to see
Placing a hand above his brow
He bolts toward me, both of us now

Our speed yields a pounding embrace, O rapture!
My deepest breath did he capture
Angels breath breezes through lush grass rolls
Amid them we spin, a union of souls

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 07-15-99 10:48 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful, simply beautiful. Welcome to the family and we all hope to see much more soon!!

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*

azblond
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since 07-01-99
Posts 651
The Steamy Desert


2 posted 07-15-99 10:51 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

I am moved by the beauty of your words! Welcome to the family and I look forward to more from you soon!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...


DreamEvil
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3 posted 07-15-99 11:00 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Wonderful poem, it moves even my black heart. Thank you, and will there be more?

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.
DreamEvilŠ


brockglaze
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since 07-13-99
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Muncie,Indiana,USA


4 posted 07-15-99 11:55 PM       View Profile for brockglaze   Email brockglaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brockglaze

how beautiful! i think you put that poem in the best words it could be put, it grabbed my heart and still hasnt let go, great poem!

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Brock J. Glaze
wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
Posts 5106
TEXAS (it's all big)


5 posted 07-16-99 08:18 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i really like this one is almost like twas written for me...oh yuh it was!! love you elisa
elisaseyes
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fort worth texas


6 posted 07-18-99 11:54 PM       View Profile for elisaseyes   Email elisaseyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elisaseyes

yes my love i am yours and you know how i feel
Alwye
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In the space between moments


7 posted 08-09-99 02:04 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Moving a favorite of mine to the top...

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
 
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