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HM3
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since 1999-07-15
Posts 169
TX

0 posted 1999-07-15 10:29 PM


I didn't take time, I didn't take care
I didn't notice you weren't standing there
I didn't call, I didn't write
I didn't growl, I didn't bite

I didn't take time, I didn't take care
I didn't not love you when you weren't there
I didn't think, I didn't act
I didn't know if you'd come back

I didn't take time, I didn't take care
Now I can feel it, it's everywhere
I didn't remember how could I forget
Just how lonely a soul can get


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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...

© Copyright 1999 Mark Ozee - All Rights Reserved
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-07-15 10:45 PM


i don't rightly know why, (well i admit, the title lured me in), but i DID like this poem

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...




[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 07-15-99).]

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