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HM3
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since 07-15-99
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0 posted 07-15-99 10:29 PM       View Profile for HM3   Email HM3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HM3

I didn't take time, I didn't take care
I didn't notice you weren't standing there
I didn't call, I didn't write
I didn't growl, I didn't bite

I didn't take time, I didn't take care
I didn't not love you when you weren't there
I didn't think, I didn't act
I didn't know if you'd come back

I didn't take time, I didn't take care
Now I can feel it, it's everywhere
I didn't remember how could I forget
Just how lonely a soul can get


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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...
© Copyright 1999 Wanda Ozee - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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1 posted 07-15-99 10:45 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i don't rightly know why, (well i admit, the title lured me in), but i DID like this poem

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...




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